Romance, Violation & Female Adolecent Sexual Desire- Tolman

There were several things I understood by readin this article. But I would first like to begin by stating how much I connected with Isabel when I was a teen. I was solicitated in the train station when I was in high school; on my way home from school. I was also molested in the train station, but just like Isabel... I had all the words but felt silenced and the words just couldnt come out of my mouth. Something I understood is that normal young girls do not have images or stories where they can respond to their own sexual desires. Sexaul desire is seen in males and is also portrayed as uncontrollable and victimizing. Although Tolman tries to use Isabel to show her desire to know herself sexaully and etc; I feel that she somewhat fails because everything she experiences sexually is based on her victimization and a males sexual desire for her body. Tolman wants adolescent females to be able to express themselves through their sexual desires. She wants to raise awareness so these girls wouldn't be silenced by men and their society. One of Tolman's solutions was to speak to boys and girls about girls entitlement to their sexual desire. She believes by doing this, romance narratives that we are used to would be rewritten.

Futhermore, Tolman states that race and class determines the way sexuality is spoken about. White young women are seen as asexual while black young women are seen as sexual. Something I would like to know is how this conclusion was made. I know black women are portrayed negatively in Hip Hop. But the same couold be said about white women and Girls Gone Wild, Mardi Gras events and etc. I wanted her to provide evidence of this statement but she focuses soley on Isabel's experience. Something else that i didnt understand is how being a sexual subject differes from being asexual object. Aren't they both equally bad?

Below is a video of spoken word poetry. I chose it because I feel it describes a little of what Tolman discusses such as a young women being violated. It also shows how girls can use sexuality to their advantage which can often be a negative thing. This also shows how sexuality can affect you based on your class. I think this is a beauiful piece and hope you enjoy it.

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New Media, Networking & Phatic Culture- Vincent Miller

Something that I understood is that communication and the value of writting has changed dramatically with the creation of socail networks such as Facebook, twitter and myspace. Miller also compares blogging to the social networking sites listen above. Blogging allowed for individualization to occur which is a "process in which communities and personal relationships, social forms and commitments are less bound by history and, under globalization, space, are free to, and perhaps forced to actively contruct their own biographies and social bond"(Miller 388).Whereas, Twitter for instance is a form of microblogging that limits the user to only 140 words. According to Miller, Twitter is a combination of a social networking site, blog and text message. This limitation also limits the quality of what a person may say in their status. Socail networking sites like facebook, focus soley on friends, images and link to others. Text isnt important or doesn not contain any quality of the textual material.Social networking sites therefore, can be refered to as Phatic exchange which can be defined accoeding to Miller as a "communicative gesture that does not inform or excanhe meaningful information or facts about the world"(Miller 393-394).

Despite these negative changes, Miller points out that phatic media also has its positives. One example of this can be text messaging( Twitter can fall in this category as well). An advantage of text messaging is that dialouge and conversation can be avoided. It also allows people to save time from having an entire conversation which could've been brief. Another advantage of pathic media and which proves that media does matter; is that a personal information can be used as commodity to build relationships.

Something I found interesting was the concept of connected prescene. This is described as being in touch through networking technologies. Some examples of networking technologies include cell phones, email, text messages, blogs and other wireless technologies. All of the above allow people to maintain social interaction and communicate. It does sadden me that the quality of the text has lessen. But on the bright side, it gives youth another way to express themselves and images such as photos is art and another form of text.